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Re: biros in a half-shell
Falafel Butterflies Your poetry makes my soul so happy, Demi! This flows beautifully, language and imagery are wonderful as always and I love how the stanzas are broken up. Wonderful ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: NaPo Discussion 2011
The end is so close I can almost taste it! So exhilarated! Hope you guys are too!
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Jasmine's Attempts to Coax Poetry Back to Her
Poem Twenty- Eight Easter Easter light taunts me now, forcing itself into my cobwebbed sleep, forcing me to get up and meet those I have left on another plain - ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: April Showers
17. I like the idea, this progresses nicely and there are some great lines like "I climbed on churchyard tombs and caught them in my hands". I think stanza two ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Jasmine's Attempts to Coax Poetry Back to Her
Poem Twenty -Seven I enjoy novels. There is always an ending. Poetry's open.
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Jasmine's Attempts to Coax Poetry Back to Her
Poem Twenty Six You You sit in silence, absorbing your notes like sunlight, sipping on your coffee which I like the smell but hate the taste of. I learn. I ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Jasmine's Attempts to Coax Poetry Back to Her
Poem Twenty- five Dear Reader, Please Excuse Me While I Fade Out, Yours Sincerely, Jasmine Hart *submitting*
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Jasmine's Attempts to Coax Poetry Back to Her
Poem Twenty-Four In The Silence "Oh, flicker, flicker..." all the eerie goblin voices hissing, coaxing, cooing, in my hazy head when I go to bed, when I tie my shoes, ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Jasmine's Attempts to Coax Poetry Back to Her
Poem Twenty Three White Roses *submitting*
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Jasmine's Attempts to Coax Poetry Back to Her
Poem Twenty Two Morning Time Washed, too much pear shower-gel, waiting for nothing in the gaping silence of morning until I can start a pointless race to sit in the ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: Jasmine's Attempts to Coax Poetry Back to Her
Poem Twenty-One Another Space Spider lamp, ten-legged instead of eight, casting light into all of the cobwebbed corners, waltzing across my plate as I eat. New friends and old. I ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Jasmine's Attempts to Coax Poetry Back to Her
Poem Twenty Paperclips I like to take paperclips and bend them out of their curves and into a line which can be easily followed and prick my fingers when I ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Jasmine's Attempts to Coax Poetry Back to Her
Poem Nineteen Jungle Any noise, any wild bird screech, a parrot mimic, maybe, something that may have been a gun shot, a heightened purr behind me, a zzzzip as the ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Jasmine's Attempts to Coax Poetry Back to Her
Poem Eighteen Nightingale I've never seen a nightingale. In my imagination, they are lilac and un-Florenced, with rounded golden beaks. But all I get are robins, magpies, crows, sometimes, maybe, ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Jasmine's Attempts to Coax Poetry Back to Her
Poem Seventeen A Welcome Rain Separation. This neighborhood which many visit, standing in the flowery gardens is silent save for blackbird song in early spring. Backs turned, no words, flowers ...
Apr 17, 2011